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I’m Barbara Edwards and this is Barb’Ed Comments. I’m an author and I feel being a writer is about sharing. It’s my view of the world exposed. Its how I look at love, hope, relationships and problem-solving, how I feel about good and evil and all the eternal questions. I’ll show you mine…

Wednesday, October 29, 2008

Halloween drawing and Rhodes End short story


As part of Halloween fun, I’m having a random drawing for those who leave a comment by October 31, 2008 at midnight for a $10 gift certificate at The Wild Rose Press.
This is a good time to introduce you to my favorite New England town. Rhodes End is located on a confluence of ley lines that draws magic and paranormal activity. Dog-legging the corners of Connecticut, Rhode Island and Massachusetts, it fails to appear on many maps due to various boundary and settlement disputes. This isn’t far from Hartford. Major highways to both Boston and New York City cut through the hills less than a mile away. It exists in my imagination and is the setting for my paranormal, Ancient Awakening.


Welcome to Rhodes End’s Halloween where All Hallows’ Eve is celebrated on the Town Green.
Two churches bracketing the wide swath of grass like book-ends dispense orange and black decorated candy bags. The scents of cinnamon, burning candles and scorched pumpkin drift on the breeze. An owl hoots from a hollow tree in the ancient cemetery behind the church. The nearby streets are dark and empty in stark contrast to the noisy party-goers. No-one goes from house to house yelling Trick-or-Treat since an incident in 1943 that no one claims to remember.
A huge bonfire lights the night where excited children toast marshmallows donated by Nelson’s grocery store and parents drink heated apple cider from Styrofoam cups. Peter’s Pluckers’, a local blue-grass band is stomping out ‘Turkey in the Straw’ to loud clapping at the gazebo strung with bobbing skeletons and ghosts. Johnson’s Orchard donates huge tubs of shiny green Granny Smith’s for bobbing. The dripping faced kids hardly wait to be dried before running off to another game. Colorfully attired townsfolk escort laughing, excited children from event to event. Everyone wants to keep the little ones safe tonight.
Costumed or painted to reflect their own personality, every child is present except Mickey Burton. He has the measles. A few giddy teenagers who dared each other to climb the flat-topped boulder on Witch’s Rock Road, run onto the green shrieking. One shouts she saw a shape fly across the face of the rising full moon. Parents nod wisely and laugh. Kids!
The full moon rises as the evening wanes and the younger children are taken home, protesting through wide yawns. Parents cast uneasy glances into the shadows. Older children drift to the games and food offered inside the church halls. More and more are encouraged to return to the safety of home as the hour grows late.
The costumed crowd oddly thickens. The patrolling police cruiser stops to allow two witches, a werewolf and a ghoul to cross the street. Headlights pick out gleaming red eyes. A casual wave is exchanged.
Under the huge silver moon, the townsfolk circle the bonfire as midnight approaches. Thankfully, a full moon doesn’t occur every All Hallows’ Eve. The churches shoo the remaining families home, shut off the lights and lock their doors.
A few brave souls linger, nervously glancing over their shoulders. The air is electric with nerves, fear tickles. A dozen witches gather to one side. Shadows conceal details, but a gleaming fang or claw occasionally reflects the flames. Hair, hide and patchy skin conceal the wearers. Too many red eyes reflect the light.
A thick-set man wearing a knit cap feeds wood onto the fire and flames leap voraciously skyward. The crowd pulled back then surges closer. It’s almost midnight, the witching hour. The heavy wood-smoke mingles with a coppery smell of fresh blood and rotting flesh. Circles within the circle join hands and murmur. Not all are willing, but they must protect their secrets.
The Congregational church clock bongs, once, twice, and the flames explode up in a column of sparks. Three, four, five…chanting echoes across the Green. Six, seven, eight, nine… skeletal figures twist and turn, stretch clutching fingers from the seething flames, almost breaking free. Demons howl. Ghouls curse. Ten, eleven… the chants strengthen until they drown the unearthly noise. The threatening figures shudders with rage. Tonight is their night to walk free!
Twelve…
With a weary sigh, the fire shapes disappear. The fire dies. Only embers remain.
The crowd silently melts into the night leaving a few shivering adults to wonder what they just saw.

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12 Comments:

At October 29, 2008 4:42 PM , Blogger Sally said...

Halloween is still going door to door to Trick or treat however it is receiving treats for the darling little costumed kids. I go with my grandchildren most years and this is no exception. I think different attendees to the event will have seen something effecting their life and none will be the same for each of them.

 
At October 29, 2008 5:46 PM , Blogger Linda Suzane said...

Really great images. Interesting town. Is it an actual excerpt from your book or a scene you made up perhaps for your next story?

On Wings of Murder murderx5.blogspot.com is also having an ongoing contest. The first drawing is October 31st. Stop by and check it out and win a free book.

 
At October 29, 2008 9:57 PM , Blogger Sarah J. McNeal said...

What a delightful story that brought back memories of my home town and my childhood. I especially liked this passage:
The churches shoo the remaining families home, shut off the lights and lock their doors.
A few brave souls linger, nervously glancing over their shoulders. The air is electric with nerves, fear tickles. A dozen witches gather to one side. Shadows conceal details, but a gleaming fang or claw occasionally reflects the flames. Hair, hide and patchy skin conceal the wearers. Too many red eyes reflect the light.
Halloween is such a fun time for us to share with kids.
Sarah McNeal

 
At October 30, 2008 4:13 PM , Blogger Judy said...

I really enjoyed the excerpt. I love the cover and especially like the title.This really sounds like a good interesting book. I have never read your books, but I will put this on my tbr pile.

 
At October 30, 2008 8:06 PM , Blogger kaisquared said...

The name of the town was a clever pun, and the story was enjoyable. I am lucky to live in a small town where Halloween is still more fun than real-life scary. Enjoy!

 
At October 30, 2008 8:19 PM , Blogger Connie Northrop said...

Gotta love a place that loves Halloween regardless of what it's called. Even fictional places. :0)

Very Cool!

 
At October 31, 2008 7:00 AM , Blogger Miss Slick One said...

Muahahahahaha!
I love the story! Left me hanging though...
Happy Halloween, Barbara!!

Phyllis Sherer
South Carolina

 
At October 31, 2008 8:53 AM , Blogger Dina said...

Happy Halloween today!!

Be tricked or treated. :)

Thaks,
Dina

 
At October 31, 2008 9:51 AM , OpenID fcammer2 said...

Happy Halloween Everyone. We had our trick or treat last night because our local high school football team made the play offs. They figured everyone would be at the game tonight. LOL

 
At October 31, 2008 3:46 PM , Blogger tigger9 said...

Happy Halloween. Hope you have a great day and night. Stay safe

 
At October 31, 2008 6:36 PM , Blogger Jane said...

Happy Halloween. Thanks for introducing us to Rhodes End.

 
At October 31, 2008 6:51 PM , Blogger Word Crafter said...

oooo Barb you do know how to spin a tale...Whew!
Thanks and Happy Halloween to you
Billie
www.billiewilliams.com

 

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